Vacation dreams

“Rhododendrons & Blue Ridge in Watercolor” Joan Doyle

#NaPoWriMo #GloPoWriMo 2024, Day 29

Drenched in summer
Dense rhododendron beckon
Peach jam, plum preserve
A rickety bus hill-bound
Travelers seek sweet respite

© Aneesha Shewani
https://www.bluepenstrokes.com


Blue Pen Strokes of April: Exploring Tanka Poetry for NaPoWriMo 2024

In 2023, I successfully participated in NaPoWriMo by writing verses inspired by book covers. You can view the collection of 30 verses in the category: Making Verse – NaPoWriM2023. Throughout April 2024, I invite you to join me on this poetic voyage. Together, we’ll traverse boundless landscapes, celebrating the beauty of language, expression, and creativity—one Tanka at a time.

Japanese scroll depicting Tanka poetry

April marks the arrival of National Poetry Writing Month or NaPoWriMo, where poets worldwide unite in the spirit of creativity and expression, “excited about the prospect of writing 30 poems in 30 days.” This year, I have chosen to explore the world of Tanka poetry and paint the canvas of April with the vivid hues of Tanka verse.

Characteristics of Tanka poetry

Tanka, a classical Japanese form closely related to haiku, weaves its magic through five lines. Its syllable pattern—5-7-5-7-7—creates a rhythmic dance of words. Yet, beyond mere structure, Tanka embodies several key characteristics that enrich its poetic essence.

  1. Syllable pattern: Tanka follows a predefined syllable pattern of 5-7-5-7-7.
  2. Themes: Tanka explores a wide spectrum of themes, from nature’s ephemeral beauty to the intricate tapestry of human emotions. Each verse evokes a specific mood or sentiment.
  3. Seasonal Imagery: Like haiku, Tanka embraces kigo—seasonal words or images. These transport readers into the heart of nature’s ever-changing landscape, where cherry blossoms bloom and snowflakes fall.
  4. Emotion: Within Tanka’s concise form, emotions flow freely. Longing, nostalgia, love, and melancholy find their voice, condensed yet potent.
  5. Pivot Line: The third line—the “pivot line” or “turning line”—acts as a bridge. It infuses the poem with nuanced depth, shifting our perspective like a sudden gust of wind.
  6. Symbolism and Metaphor: Tanka thrives on layers of meaning. Each word becomes a brushstroke, painting vivid scenes within its limited canvas.
  7. Immediacy: Tanka captures life’s fleeting moments—the dew on a petal, the touch of a lover’s hand. Each verse resonates with immediacy, inviting readers to feel, reflect, and connect.

A daily Tanka journey

In 2023, I successfully participated in NaPoWriMo by writing verses inspired by book covers. You can view the collection of 30 verses in the category: Making Verse – NaPoWriM2023. Throughout April 2024, I invite you to join me on this poetic voyage. Together, we’ll traverse boundless landscapes, celebrating the beauty of language, expression, and creativity—one Tanka at a time. Bookmark the category: Making Verse – NaPoWriM2024.


Just rest

#SenseWrds is a #writing #prompt that challenges the #writer to not include the given prompt words. Here is my take on the three words – graceful, imagine, and ambling – for #SenseWrds #prompt 596.

Brush strokes in vivid colors – an image by Bing Image Generator

The wind sways
Languid branches
With a gentle lullaby
And dreams pause a bit
On verdant beds
So that they can put
Chaos to rest
And let not nightmares
Be conjured from within
The darkening forests
Of doubt and despair

The moon is a batik stamp

Lines written for #FromOneLine 278

A batik image of a moon, fabric, paper, stars, and letters made by Bing AI Image Generator

I waited until midnight
For the moon to blossom
Like a batik print stamp
On indigo-dyed fabric,
To whisper stories
Scripted on handmade paper
Sprinkled with stars
And cursive letters
Dipped in darkest inks
From the unending horizons.

Whispers

#SenseWrds is a #writing #prompt that challenges the #writer to not include the given prompt words. Here is my take on the three words – alto, feeling, and branches – for #SenseWrds #prompt 595.

A psychedelic image of a person surrounded by whispers, storms, feelings, arteries, sinews, and promises of love, generated by Bing Image Generator

The whispers sweep in
Tender and mild
Awakening storms;
Feelings trying to
Breakthrough
This entanglement:
Entwined in arteries
And pulsating sinews;
As her voice summons
Promises of love,
As truant as the wind
On whose airy wings
They flit towards me